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The young girl looking back at me looks familiar. She has sea blue eyes with hints of gold like magical fairy dust. She always wears gold sleepers that look like horseshoes made of gold. She has skin **//__is__//** as soft as silk with her rosy red cheeks. She wears a black elastic head band, as black as a heart of coal. Her blonde hair bounces as if it was bouncing on clouds. Her pink glossy lips make her look like she’s wearing glittery lip gloss. Her happy smile lights up the room.
 * 2nd Draft

I know I did a good job because I used a few similes and I think it describes me perfectly!
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She was born in the year 1997 at home where she still lives to this day. She has many fond memories but this one is boldly highlighted in her mind. One day young Lucy Locket decided she didn’t want her little fringe. She found a pair of handy toe nail scissors. She ran back down the hallway and into her room. She climbed to the top of her bunk and started snipping her cute little fringe. after she had finished her hair looked like a rats nest! I know i did a good job because I remembered a funny memory and had fun while writing it!
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Through out Lucy’s life she has had numerous goals and ambitions, like becoming a photographer or a professional artist, or cartoonist. But her main goal is to become a veterinarian nurse and work at her local vet clinic. She would love to achieve that goal because she has a passion for animals and likes to help them. She always works to the best of her ability and puts in a lot of effort. Her overall favourite subject at school is art. She has many random, funny and awesome friends.

I know I did well with paragraph three, because I found it easy to come up with and it sounds great!
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Is it possible to put all the reflections at the end? Copy your final piece of text - Miss Crawford//**
 * //You've created a piece of writing that reflects your personality well. Can you add more descriptive language to your memory of cutting your hair? Can you add how your parents reacted? - Miss Crawford


 * Final

The young girl looking back at me looks familiar. She has sea blue eyes with hints of gold like magical fairy dust. She always wears gold sleepers that look like horseshoes made of gold. Her skin is as soft as silk with her rosy red cheeks. She wears a black elastic head band, as black as a heart of coal. Her blonde hair bounces as if it was bouncing on clouds. Her pink glossy lips make her look like she’s wearing glittery lip gloss. Her happy smile lights up the room.

She was born in the year 1997 at home where she still lives to this day. She has many fond memories but this one is boldly highlighted in her mind. One day young Lucy Locket decided she didn’t want her little fringe. She found a pair of old, smelly handy toe nail scissors. She quickly and quietly ran back down the hallway and into her room. She climbed to the top of her bunk and started snipping her cute little fringe. after she had finished her hair looked like a rats nest! A few hours later her mother entered the room, her eyes popped out like a bullet from a gun. Her mother was very suprised. She asked what I had done. Lucy's face went bright red like a cherry tomato! So her mother got a pair of actual scissors and fixed it up!

Through out Lucy’s life she has had numerous goals and ambitions, like becoming a photographer or a professional artist, or cartoonist. But her main goal is to become a veterinarian nurse and work at her local vet clinic. She would love to achieve that goal because she has a passion for animals and likes to help them. She always works to the best of her ability and puts in a lot of effort. Her overall favourite subject at school is art. She has many random, funny and awesome friends.


 * Reflection: I know I did a good job because I understood exactly how to write it and had fun in the writing of it. Over all I would rate myself in the relational section on the solo taxonomy. :)